Kakashiprince
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- Jul 3, 2012
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- Vietnamese
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- Canada
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I trying to make a sentence sound "professional" and "complex"...and some of my friends said it makes sense and the others don't
What do you guys think:
"The similarities approach and the differences approach are both intertwined with each other; for that reason, these principles are knit together to form the fabric of our society."
(I use the term "knit" and "fabric" purposely...)
Thanks for reading my post
- Kakashiprince
What do you guys think:
"The similarities approach and the differences approach are both intertwined with each other; for that reason, these principles are knit together to form the fabric of our society."
(I use the term "knit" and "fabric" purposely...)
Thanks for reading my post
- Kakashiprince