Can you help me check grammar and spelling my text??

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MLej

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Hi I am new on this forum so please be patient. I start from September ESOL Level 1. I think my skills of reading are quite good but writing and grammar are really bad. I need help with text below. I have written it but I am not sure is it correct :-?. If someone can be so kind and check grammar and spelling for me.
Thank you in advance.

Hi

Today I received the t-shirts. I am very happy from the blacks shirts the quality of them is really good, but there is a few problems with the whites. The first and most important is that size of 7 (1-M, 3-L, 3-XL) whites t-shirts dose not agree with your sizing table ( for example size L on tag got only 106 cm in chest and only 69 cm length and size L should have, like show your sizing table, 111-116 cm in chest and 74.5 cm length ). Another problem is that 4 of them are dirty ( visible yellow traces ). What can you suggest under the following situation??


I am looking forward to hearing from you.


Yours faithfully
 

aburisha

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Note:I am not an English teacher.


Hello

Today I received the t-shirts. I am very happy about the black shirts for their really good quality. However, there are a few problems with the white shirts. The first and most important is that size of 7 (1-M, 3-L, 3-XL) white t-shirts are not comptible with your sizing table ( for example size L on tag got only 106 cm in chest and only 69 cm length and size L should have, as shown your sizing table, 111-116 cm in chest and 74.5 cm length ). Another problem is that 4 of them are dirty ( with visible yellow traces ). What can you suggest in such a situation?


I am looking forward to hearing from you.


Yours faithfully
 
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