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    How to write a sentence like the presentation was presented ....

    Hi,

    In the meeting our Supervisor has presented the MS Office Presentation on ongoing activities. How can I write it in a simple sentence...?

    The Supervisor read the meeting agenda in brief and presented the presentation in detail.

    It seems awkward. Please correct it.

    Thanks.

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    Re: How to write a sentence like the presentation was presented ....

    We "give" or "deliver" a presentation.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: How to write a sentence like the presentation was presented ....

    Quote Originally Posted by sweetie123 View Post
    Hi,

    In the meeting our Supervisor has presented the MS Office Presentation on ongoing activities. How can I write it in a simple sentence...?

    The Supervisor read the meeting agenda in brief and presented the presentation in detail.

    It seems awkward. Please correct it.

    Thanks.
    OR "........and presented it in detail".

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    Re: How to write a sentence like the presentation was presented ....

    Our supervisor (no need for a capital S) briefly reviewed the agenda and then delivered the detailed presentation.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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