[Grammar] Grammar Check1

[dj_dipuu]

Need help again. word is omitted in each line...I'm writing as a context as well


Next day it raining a little.
The other girls went all the
same ltheir raincoats and I
slipped my black dress,
coatless under the rain, running ( OK )
the entire way much afraid that he ( OK )
would have left.( OK )


Next day it WAS raining a little.The other girls went WITH all the same AS their raincoats and I slipped INTO my black dress,coatless under the rain, running the entire way much afraid that he would have left.

Last three lines are fine..

2) In air around us, the
molecules of gas usually so far
apart our eyes cannot
detect them-Although a
few, is possible to detect
them by smell. Gases no
firm shape form. Their molecules
move rapidly every direction
to fill whatever container are in.

In THE air around us, the molecules of gas ARE usually so far apart THAT our eyes cannot detect them-Although a few, IT is possible to detect them by smell. Gases HAS no firm shape form. Their molecules move rapidly IN every direction to fill whatever container are in.


Please help

Deepak J

 

[5jj]

You appear to be having quite a few problems with these exercises. dj-dipuu. It hardly seems fair to give them to your students if you make mistakes yourself.

 

[Tdol]

The other girls went WITH all the same AS their raincoats

This isn't correction- it's wrong, and actually hard to see the intended meaning- were their raincoats all the same or were the rest of what they were wearing the same as their raincoats?

I slipped INTO my black dress,coatless under the rain

There's no context that suggests why I would be getting dressed outside in the rain, so expecting someone to supply the preposition into here does not strike me as fair.