Jeff Wei Liang
Member
- Joined
- Aug 10, 2012
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Malaysia
- Current Location
- Malaysia
A very good day to every member at UsingEnglish forum. I'm a newly join member seeking for advise to enhance my English.
Here's my problem, I'm currently assign a project by my manager and because this project will be presented to others department manager and senior executive, I don't want my bad English bring any disgrace to my Manager. Below is few sentence that i wrote for presentation.
Any advise and comment is much appreciated as I can learn from my mistake and write a better English in near future.
Regards,
Jeff
Here's my problem, I'm currently assign a project by my manager and because this project will be presented to others department manager and senior executive, I don't want my bad English bring any disgrace to my Manager. Below is few sentence that i wrote for presentation.
What does others luxury brand offer for personalization?
How others luxury brand present personalization service?
What does xxxxx company offer for personalization?
How xxxxx company present personalization service?
Any advise and comment is much appreciated as I can learn from my mistake and write a better English in near future.
Regards,
Jeff