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    #1

    Is the editing okay? Cut "in that case"

    Edit:

    The therapy has an unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients. In that case, the therapy is involved with x mutation in the virus.

    Into:

    For the unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients, the therapy is involved with x mutation in the virus.


    Do they have the same meaning?

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    #2

    Re: Is the editing okay? Cut "in that case"

    The therapy has an unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients. In that case, the therapy is involved with x mutation in the virus.
    Into:
    For the unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients, the therapy is involved with x mutation in the virus.


    I'm not sure if I understand the intended meaning correctly, but perhaps:

    In the cases of unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients, the therapy is involved with x mutation in the virus.
    or…
    The therapy has an unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients. In these cases, the therapy is involved with x mutation in the virus.
    or…
    When the therapy has unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients, it's caused by the therapy's involvement with x mutation in the virus.

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    Re: Is the editing okay? Cut "in that case"

    Quote Originally Posted by JMurray View Post
    The therapy has an unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients. In that case, the therapy is involved with x mutation in the virus.
    Into:
    For the unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients, the therapy is involved with x mutation in the virus.


    I'm not sure if I understand the intended meaning correctly, but perhaps:

    In the cases of unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients, the therapy is involved with x mutation in the virus.
    or…
    The therapy has an unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients. In these cases, the therapy is involved with x mutation in the virus.
    or…
    When the therapy has unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients, it's caused by the therapy's involvement with x mutation in the virus.

    not a teacher
    Thank you.

    The original text (in Chinese) refers to:

    The therapy's unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients is associated with x mutation in the virus.


    I am not sure whether the use "'s" in " The therapy's" is proper.

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    Re: Is the editing okay? Cut "in that case"

    Quote Originally Posted by NewHopeR View Post
    The therapy's unsatisfactory therapeutic efficacy in some patients is associated with x mutation in the virus.
    That's OK, though you can drop the 'therapeutic'.

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