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    #1

    diverse services

    ..........Thank you
    Last edited by sarah-; 18-Aug-2012 at 04:37.

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    #2

    Re: diverse services

    It's not necessary, but in my opinion would be a big improvement.

    Rover

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    #3

    Re: diverse services

    And di verse the service di more we charge.

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    #4

    Re: diverse services

    Your Member Information provides an unlikely amalgam of provenances, but are you sure francophony is not there somewhere? French menus often end 'Fruits divers', and although 'diverse services' is not wrong here, as the first response said, 'diverse range of ...' is preferable.

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    Last edited by BobK; 17-Aug-2012 at 18:41. Reason: Fix typoes

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    #5

    Re: diverse services

    THank you!

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    #6

    Re: diverse services

    Perhaps there is a glitch on my phone, but post #1 appears to contain nothing but several dots and "Thank you". I assume there was a question there originally. Could the OP or an admin put it back?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #7

    Re: diverse services

    It appears that Sarah deleted the question.

    It was something like

    Is it OK to say 'Our company provides diverse services'. Somebody said it has to be 'Our company provides a diverse range of services'.
    Rover

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