Compare and Contrast Paragraph on Five Faces of Genius

[kentw223]

Please! need help correcting this paragraph's grammar and punctuation. It is due tomorrow, and is a compare and contrast on the five faces of genius, and i was tied for the fool and observer. But i don't know think i need to contrast that exactly. do you know what i mean? as long as i put that it fits me perfectly and i don't have anything to differentiate.

The five faces of genius are can be very open to the idea that you could be two at the same time, and it comes down to making a personal decision between two. I had a tie between observer and fool, but who wants to be an observer right? So I chose fool and take it proudly. This is exactly what I thought I would be, as I love to make jokes. Now why did I choose that archetype out of them all? All of my life, I have let laughter define my life: I light-heartedly make fun of others, watch South Park when looking for television shows, and look to the humor in pain when it comes down to it. In a normal compare and contrast paper, you would point out the differentials between two people or ideals, but I honestly believe there isn’t anything to contrast. As the fool fits me perfectly, like that old pair of Nike’s.

 

[emsr2d2]

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[Rover_KE]

I'm moving this thread to the more appropriate Editing & Writing Topics forum.