jasveron
Junior Member
- Joined
- Nov 20, 2006
- Member Type
- Other
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Hong Kong
- Current Location
- Hong Kong
How can I present the below idea in a better (formal) style?
It is intended to be the reply slip in an invitation email.
"I agree to be the ABC Ambassador and I understand that some of my personal information, my picture(s) and my writing - where OIA holds the right to edit, will be displayed on the OIA website."
ABC = School's name
OIA = Office's name
Thank you!
It is intended to be the reply slip in an invitation email.
"I agree to be the ABC Ambassador and I understand that some of my personal information, my picture(s) and my writing - where OIA holds the right to edit, will be displayed on the OIA website."
ABC = School's name
OIA = Office's name
Thank you!