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    is this correct?

    We at Mane Developers firmly believe inidentifying properties that appreciate more in long term to create wealth.

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    Re: is this correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    We at Mane Developers firmly believe in identifying properties that appreciate more in the long term to create wealth.
    Now it's grammatical.

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    Re: is this correct?

    Grammatical, maybe. But I'm not sure that it means very much.

    I assume that the 'properties' in question are houses, flats, etc. I wonder what a 'property that appreciates more' is, and whether there's a difference between 'appreciating more [than green bananas, say? ] and 'creating wealth'. And what do you 'firmly believe in'?

    Perhaps 'we.... firmly believe in [the importance of?] creating wealth for our clients by identifying properties that will appreciate more quickly than others'...?

    b

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