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    #1

    Which sentence is correct?

    We canít enter time record for our mechanical department's employees in the web based time sheet system as the proxy section is not displaying when we click onto the icon, and it will display only non-proxy page. / We are now experiencing problems for entering time records in the web based timesheet system for our mechanical department's employees as the proxy section is not displaying when we click onto the icon, and it will display only non-proxy page.


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    Re: Which sentence is correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    We can’t enter time records for our mechanical department's employees in the web based time sheet system. The proxy section is not displaying when we click onto the icon, and it will display only non-proxy page. / We are currently experiencing problems entering time records in the web based timesheet system for our mechanical department's employees. The proxy section is not displaying when we click onto the icon, and it will display only non-proxy page.
    Both are run-on sentences. But with a couple of adjustments, they are both fine.

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    Re: Which sentence is correct?

    Thank you

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    Re: Which sentence is correct?

    A better title would have been We can't enter time records.

    You don't need to send your thanks in a separate post. We are all happy to accept a simple click on the Like button as your acknowledgement of our help.

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