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    About Grammar Right or wrong?

    Is this right or wrong?How can I correct it?

    "when he traveled to Europe, he left his books with his extensive library in the storage."

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    Re: About Grammar Right or wrong?

    I would say it like this:

    'When he traveled to Europe, he put his extensive collection of books into storage.'

    You can use 'library' to mean 'a collection of books, records, etc that belong to one person' (Macmillan), but it more commonly refers to the building or room where they are kept.

    Start every sentence with a capital letter.

    Tip for a more helpful title: When he traveled to Europe.

    Rover
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 15-Sep-2012 at 07:44.

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