iwantout
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I'd like to ask for some help with my paper. I will post some of its fragments with some more comments. I'm not native speaker, but I'd like my text to be natural and I'd like it to be easy to read.
I'm not sure about:
1. "We can find its origins..."
2. "Later, by creating..." - maybe it should be "with creating" i don't know
3. I'm not sure about the tenses...
Homology theory is one of the main tools used in algebraic topology. We
can find its origins in the end of XIX century when people started their
research in order to understand manifolds and, more generally, simplicial
complexes. Later, by creating singular homology theory, the concepts have
been generalized to all topological spaces. Singular homology theory is well
understood for tame spaces (e.g. simplicial complexes, manifolds) and some
steps to grasp its behaviour for more complicated spaces has been taken by
a new emerging field which we call "wild algebraic topology" (it is focused
on spaces like: Hawaiian Earring [2] [3] [4], Harmonic Archipelago [6] [5],
Sierpinski-gasket [1], etc.)
I'm not sure about:
1. "We can find its origins..."
2. "Later, by creating..." - maybe it should be "with creating" i don't know
3. I'm not sure about the tenses...