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    ziawj2 is offline Member
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    formal / informal memo

    I wrote a memo in formal and informal style. Could you help me to check it?I need to wrote about 100 words, but I do not konw what I could add. Could you give me some advice? Thank you!

    formal
    Memo
    To: All schoolmates
    From:Wu Jing, Wings of sky
    Date: September 13
    Subject: Movie night

    A movie (Spiderman) night is organized in Classroom A001 at 7:00 p.m. on Sunday, September 16 by Wings of Sky. All are welcome.

    informal
    Memo
    To: All schoolmates
    From:Wu Jing, Monitor
    Date: September 13
    Subject: Movie night

    All of us are facing the stress of Passing the exam, CET-6, this term, so I am planning a movie night to have some fun. We will watch the movie (Spiderman) in Classroom A001 at 7:00 p.m. on Sun., Sep. 16. If you have any suggestion for the movies, please contact me at 18971393955 before Sep. 15. Hope we have a wonderful night.

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Re: formal / informal memo

    I would suggest being informal with your schoolmates. I would also change passing to taking and ask for suggestions about other movies.

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