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Hi! I have sucn an abstract: "We observe peaceful rural landscapes. Spring fields and pagans working there, women laundering at the river, chickens pecking, a spring murmuring. SUDDENLY! A sound of a CHILD CRYING shatters this harmony". Is this ok to say "shutter harmony"? May be it is better to use some other verb? I am also wondering about "a sound of a child crying"... does it sound like English?
Please be aware that I'm neither a native English speaker nor a teacher.