Nice work. Good Luck!Hello, could someone check this first version of my master application? Would really appreciate it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is ______.
and I am writing youThis is to express my interest in applying for the Master programme, Innovation & Management in Tourism, scheduled to start in September 2013.
I am currently studying Management and Tourism at the NHTV University of Applied Sciences in Breda, The Netherlands. During my time at this University I have gained a strong academic background in the subjects of marketing, imagineering, destination management and corporate communication. Combined with my work experience in the field of eTourism at the company _____, I
am the bestI consider myself to be an excellent candidate for thismaster programme.
The international orientation of the programme is what appeals to me
themost. I have spent 6 months abroad as an intern in Switzerland. HereThere I worked at ain an international department and this absolutelysignificantly broadened my own horizonpersonal goals. I enjoy working in the tourism industry, because it is ana dynamic and continuously changing business. Because of my time abroad my language skills in both English and German are bothexcellent. I also enjoy learning new languages.
Another reason for choosing this specific master, is that it perfectly matches with the courses that I have followed during my Bachelor education
(see transcript of records).My transcript is enclosed. I am specifically interested in Imagineering, the USP of this programme.
After successfully finishing my masters degree, my professional goal is to work in a
leadinglead position for a well-known company in the field of tourism, . This master programme will contribute positively to the evolution of my career. (A great statement)
I am certain that my previous academic career, my strong interest and existing knowledge in tourism, my ambition and eagerness to broaden my horizon and educate myself further, make me a highly suitable candidate for the Innovation & Management in Tourism Master programme at your University. (Another great statement)
Thank you for considering my application.