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Hi, I got some problem in a essay, Could I ask for your help?
"The policy will divide the market into two segments, one for locals and another for both locals and non-locals."
Q1.Is "another" rightly used in the sentence, should it be substituted by "the other"?
"Given there are only 5000 flats provided in the scheme, the total amount of local buyers is too large to be covered."
Q2.Is it a reasonable sentence, can I convey the message that "the number of the flats in the scheme is too small to cover all the local buyers"?
The policy of excluding non-locals from local property market will tarnish our reputation as a free economy and reduce the incentives of foreign investors to park their capital in Hong Kong
Q3. Are the underlined phrases rightly used?
Thanks so much
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.