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    Are these sentences grammatically correct?

    Please note that the following items have been returned back to us by the supplier on [date]. These were returned to the supplier earlier because of non-conformity, and these were not dealt with our requirement in time as per the site requirements.

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    Re: Are these sentences grammatically correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by MAJSH View Post
    Please note that the following items have been returned back to us by the supplier on [date]. These were returned to the supplier earlier because of non-conformity, and these were not dealt with our requirement in time as per the site requirements.
    Please note that the following items were returned to us by the supplier on [date]. These had been returned to the supplier earlier because of non-conformity, and these were not dealt with our requirement in time as per the site requirements.
    The part in red doesn't make sense.

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    Re: Are these sentences grammatically correct?

    Thank you very much for your help. Can I write as follows?

    Please note that the following items were returned to us by the supplier on [date]. These had been returned to the supplier earlier because of non-conformity, and these items were not meet to our requirement even though they didn't supply it on time as per the request.

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    Re: Are these sentences grammatically correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by MAJSH View Post
    Thank you very much for your help. Can I write as follows?

    Please note that the following items were returned to us by the supplier on [date]. These had been returned to the supplier earlier because of non-conformity, and these items were not meet to our requirement even though they didn't supply it on time as per the request.
    No, it's still not clear.

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