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    Two sentences

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    Do these sentences need correction?
    I don't really care about what dog breed will my dog belong. I would rather adopt a dog in danger of euthanasia. No matter ugly or beautiful.

    I don't really care about dog breeds. I would rather adopt a dog in danger of euthanasia. No matter ugly or beautiful.

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    Re: Two sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by sondra View Post
    Hello,

    Do these sentences need correction?
    I don't really care about what dog breed will my dog belong. I would rather adopt a dog in danger of euthanasia. No matter ugly or beautiful.

    I don't really care about dog breeds. I would rather adopt a dog in danger of euthanasia. No matter ugly or beautiful.

    Thanks
    "I don't really care about dog breeds. I would rather adopt a dog in danger of euthanasia. No matter whether it's ugly or beautiful."
    The first one doesn't work at all.

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