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    Please Check This Paragraph

    Success are not sacrament of temple, Which may be achieved with easily."

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    Re: Please Check This Paragraph

    This is not a paragraph, and I'm afraid it doesn't make sense.

    Rover

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    Re: Please Check This Paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
    This is not a paragraph, and I'm afraid it doesn't make sense.Rover
    Respected Teacher. Please tell me what's called this kind article. I'm trying say:

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    Re: Please Check This Paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
    This is not a paragraph, and I'm afraid it doesn't make sense.Rover
    Respected Teacher. Please tell me what's called this kind article. I'm trying say:

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    Re: Please Check This Paragraph

    Success are not sacrament of temple, Which maybe achieved with easily." Success not like speech of church. which you get easily.Thanks for your valuable feedback.Take care yourself

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    Re: Please Check This Paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by Mak_786 View Post
    Success are not sacrament of temple, Which maybe achieved with easily." Success not like speech of church. which you get easily.Thanks for your valuable feedback.Take care yourself
    "Success is not like temple sacraments which may be achieved with ease." I think this is what you want to say.

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    @bhaisahab Ones again you're absolutely right.I'm sorry for not called you "Respected Teacher" Because as per yours age "bhaisahab" is better. "bhaisahab means Big Brother as i understood you thanks for your valuable feedback. One things i'm well aware on this site. I must need every post with a tiny hint/ means for to understand other members or respected teachers. what i want to say. Maybe it's helpful. {_Apna Khayal Rakhiyega_} Have a good day.

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