One of my students, preparing a persuasion map on the topic 'Careers', used this sentence:
'Without correct determination of your goals, hard work and development of your skills, your success is not possible.'
Is it OK to say 'Without correct determination of your goals'?
I would say 'Without setting right goals'.
Thank you in advance.
Last edited by vectra; 29-Sep-2012 at 21:11. Reason: spelling