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    A clause

    "The more the doctors leave the public sector, the larger the pressure will be exerted on the existing staff, pushing them to leave"

    Is it rightly written? Or it is better to substitute the underlined clause with " will be on"?

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    Re: A clause

    The more doctors leave the public sector, the greater the pressure on remaining staff, and therefore the more likely they are to leave.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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