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Critics argued that the scheme would exert a crushing burden on the government as it entails additional six billion dollars of welfare expenses. However, such argument has lost its ground.
Should the underlined words be changed to "entailed" and "an additional welfare expense of six billion dollars"? and is the sentence "such argument has lost its ground" a right usage?
Thanks so much!!
Last edited by KSSEEJ; 06-Oct-2012 at 18:16.