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      • France
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    Post english cv's mistakes

    Looking for a job I have writed an english CV.
    But I don't speak very well english and I need help by correcting my english CV.
    Please, for helping me,you have below the CV:

    Adele SBIP
    Home adress : Rue Edgar Faure
    Phone number:00 00 00 00 00
    Date of birth : YY/YY/YYYY

    Profil: Dynamic, motivated and reliable professional with a background in business management, territorial development and relationship,and expertise in management control,relationship and project management. Currently looking for opportunities to utilise existing skills.
    2011 – 2012 : Postgraduate degree following my master(Bac +6), Universities of Agrosup Dijon and
    Agroparitech, France

    Mastère spécialisé en action publique pour le développement durable des territoires et
    Option :Rural development and agriculture (Agriculture et développement rural)

    2006 – 2009 : Postgraduate degree following my master(Bac+5), University of Cheikh Anta Diop in Dakar,

    Diplôme d'Etudes Supérieures en Commerce, Administration et Finance (DESCAF)

    2006 – 2004 : Marketing 2 years technical degree , University of Cheikh Anta Diop in Dakar, Senegal

    2004 : High School Diploma(Science)
    Série : S1 au Lycée Djignabo in Ziguinchor, Senegal

    Professional Expérience:
    September 2011 - June 2012 :Training course, Fédération Nationale des Cuma(Fn Cuma), France
    Advanced skills in Project évaluation

    November 2010 - April 2011: Temporary Capex and Costing analyst, Operations finance,Philip Morris Manufacturing, Senegal
    Advanced skills in management control: US GAP accounting, costing analysis, capital expenses analysis and rolling forecast

    January 2010 - November 2010 : Placement,Agrophytex S.A,Senegal
    Good knoledge of development programs and development projects, prospection and negociation and advanced skills in agriculture projects,stocks management and marketing

    June 2008 - Décember 2009 : Temporary, Agence client en ligne(Hot line office), Orange-Senegal, Senegal
    Advanced skills in «relation client»

    August 2007 - September 2007 : Placement, Administrative and Accoounting direction , Agence Senegalaise d’Electrification Rurale (Senegalese Agencie of Rural electrification) (ASER), Senegal
    Good knolegde of public finance, Advanced skills in rural development

    Septembre 2006 : Training course, Commercial départment, Fondation Trade Point, Senegal
    Good knoledge of public structure, Ability to identity and to propose upportunities

    Septembre 2005 : Placement, Général accounting Director,CBAO(Compagnie bancaire de l’Afrique de l’Ouest)
    Ability of working in professionnal structure, good knoledge of the big structure fonctionment

    Professional skills :
    • Languages : French, native tongue
    English, intermédiate level

    • Computer Science : Windows, linux and mac environments
    Sofwares : Saari, MS Project, Tompro, Delta, Spad, file maker pro
    Musique, Basket ball, Social activities,

    This is the end of the text. Thank you

  2. Key Member
    English Teacher
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    Re: english cv's mistakes

    Before continuing on, I will point out that it is an absolute waste of time and effort on your part to use French in a document meant to be read by an English speaker. Except for the names of the various schools you have attended, use English terms if you want to obtain a position at an English speaking company.

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