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These groups, whose members usually belong to the same ethnic origin, are very hard to be penetrated for gathering intelligence. They are closed and based on personal acquaintanceship and total loyalty to the group. The smaller and the more homogeneous the group is, the more dangerous it might be.
Last edited by motico; 24-Oct-2012 at 18:59.