[Essay] My bad dream

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A few days ago, I had a horrible dream that scared me. I don't know why, but I woke up in my dream and I found an human head beside me. The head was bandaged and had blood. After seeing the head I saw blood on my right arm. I thought that the head's blood could transmit me a disease. I remember I was looking for a doctor in my dream.

When I woke up I thought "Luckily it was only a dream!".

Has my essay mistakes? Could you correct it, please? Thanks in advance :)
 

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A few days ago, I had a horrible dream that scared me. I don't know why, but I woke up in my dream and I found [STRIKE]an[/STRIKE] a human head beside me. The head was bandaged and had blood on it. After seeing the head I saw blood on my right arm. I thought that the head's blood could transmit [STRIKE]me [/STRIKE] a disease to me. I remember I was looking for a doctor in my dream.

When I woke up I thought "Luckily it was only a dream!".

Has my essay mistakes? Could you correct it, please? Thanks in advance :)
That's pretty good.
 
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Thanks, Raymott.
 
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