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    comma splice

    She looked at the sun, it was sitting dangerously close to the west. She only hoped they had time to get everything of importance.

    i think the "it" should be replaced by "which".
    She looked at the sun, which was....
    am i correct?

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    Re: comma splice

    That's one way, but you could also change the coma to a semi-colon.

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