[Essay] geographical distributions

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Ashiuhto

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Would anyone be kind enough to check the following paragraph? Thanks!

Purpose
Investigating the McDonald’s specialty of geographical distributions, shopping districts and customers to achieve the following research purposes:
1. Analyze McDonald’s distributions in Taipei.
2. Analyze the property at McDonald.
3. Analyze the management methods of McDonald’s.

 

Gillnetter

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Would anyone be kind enough to check the following paragraph? Thanks!

Purpose
Investigating the McDonald’s specialty of geographical distributions, shopping districts and customers to achieve the following research purposes:
1. Analyze McDonald’s distributions in Taipei.
2. Analyze the property at McDonald.
3. Analyze the management methods of McDonald’s.

1. This is not a paragraph. It is mostly a list.
2. You spelled "McDonald's" three times. Why did you spell it "McDonald" once?
3. What sort of property would you analyze in #2?
4. Why is the article "the" used before McDonald's?
5. What does the first sentence mean? How does one investigate customers?
 
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