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There were lots of differences between field trip and classroom-teaching at school. It was my first time to visit the headquarters of LiveABC Magazine Company. How surprising it is to enrich my experience. Mr. Jason Chen, the chief editor as well as the vice president of LiveABC, explained how they spend tremendous efforts on the intricate procedures of publishing a magazine and making a CD-ROM. Even a common, ordinary CD-ROM that we donít cherish much wants to be something more than it is. Therefore, we should make the most use of the magazines and the CD-ROMs to make our English ability go advanced. That was really a special experience for us and we learned a valuable lesson.