Good luck. But please remember to use proper capitalization.Hi, i write here some phrases i use in my songs and iīm not very sure if itīs right and if it really has the meaning i think it has in English. I work with google translator and tools like that, and my english level isnīt very good.
If you can help me i thank you.
Please use "I" for the personal pronoun, not "i."
"scars will hide their own" This is the only one I don't quite get.
"i faded into the storm" Okay. Could be a real storm, could be a metaphorical storm (more likely in a song). Either way, it's okay with a capital I.
"...and then drift to the unkown" drift into the unknown.
" i can walk the night" Probably okay - sounds like something a lonely guy would do.
"under my skin, someone has been, diving inside, into my dreams." Sound like very typical song lyrics to me.
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