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In 21st century, when social life has changed a lot, we have to try to study to catch up this modern life. Therefore, doing homework which the teachers always give a lot to us. Many different controversies about it. In my opinion, i think there are both advantages and disadvantages to do homework.
The main advantage of doing homework is that doing homework help us to remember knowledge which our teachers taught in the class. In addition, our teachers may know what we learnt and understood through it. From which they may change the way their teaching to make us get easier to understand their lessons. Moreover, doing many homework may provides some necessary knowledges to help us get easy to find a good job in the future.
Besides them, there are several disadvantages of it. Especially stressful which is the one of diseases is very dangerous to our life. Stuffing many knowledges into our brain through doing many homework its may not only useless to us, but also makes us get stress very easy. Moreover, it may have bad affect to our health such as wearing glasses of students even little kids.
To sum up, doing homework is very important to review our knowledge but we must not abuse it to force our children to do all day. Nothing is perfect. Therefore, we have to combine between doing homework and relaxing through outside activities or something like this.
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