For and against essay

[D.Alex]

Spring or Autumn, Summer or Winter; all people have their favourite season. Although we can not change a season for another in the year we can decide when to go on holiday.For some of us, going on holiday on winter is the secret for a perfect holiday but in reality it has both its advantages and disadvantages.
There are many advantages in choosing winter as your holiday’s season. To begin with, a winter holiday gives you the opportunity to practice winter sports such as downhill skiing, snowboarding and Ice skating which are all excellent forms of cardiovascular exercise. An additional advantage is then the fact that your expanses will be notably lower because from plane tickets to hotel rooms and local attractions, the prices are decreased.Finally, many people feel argue that during the winter, you can find more easily uncrowded destinations, therefore with less noise and queues, and more genuine local sceneries that will afford you unsurpassed peace of mind.
However, there are certain disadvantages in going on holiday in winter. First of all, the cold temperatures can get you sick often so you will not be able to take advantage of the holiday at all. Another negative aspect is that behind the enjoyment of the winter sports are many injuries and accidents, sometimes very serious. Last but not least, the roads and highways are covered in snow and slush so they are rife with danger and also the possibility of getting snowed is bigger.
Taking everything into account, it is clear that a winter holiday can be a great choice for both relaxation and exercising especially if you keep in mind the possible dangers that can occurs.

I would be more than thankful if you can correct it.
Thank you very much !

[Gillnetter]

Spring or autumn, summer or winter; all people have their favourite season. Although we can not change a one season for another in the year, we can decide when to go on holiday. For some of us, going on holiday on in the winter is the secret for a perfect holiday, but in reality it has both its advantages and disadvantages.
There are many advantages in choosing winter as your holiday’s holiday season. To begin with, a winter holiday gives you the opportunity to practice winter sports such as downhill skiing, snowboarding and ice skating which are all excellent forms of cardiovascular exercise. An additional advantage is then the fact that your expanses expenses will be notably lower because, from plane tickets to hotel rooms and local attractions, the prices are decreased lower. Finally, many people feel argue that during the winter you can easily find more easily uncrowded destinations, therefore with less noise and queues, and more genuine local sceneries scenery that will afford you unsurpassed peace of mind.
However, there are certain disadvantages in going on holiday in winter. First of all, the cold temperatures can often get you sick often so you will not be able to take advantage of the holiday at all. Another negative aspect is that, behind the enjoyment of the winter sports are many injuries and accidents, sometimes very serious. Last but not least, the roads and highways are covered in snow and slush so they are rife with danger and also the possibility of getting snowed (snowed-in?) is bigger.
Taking everything into account, it is clear that a winter holiday can be a great choice for both relaxation and exercising especially if you keep in mind the possible dangers that can occurs occur.

I would be more than thankful if you can correct it.
Thank you very much !

Gil

[D.Alex]

Thank you very much Gil.
I really appreciate it.