b.Please help me improve the following sentences!
The FA, after careful consideration,
hasdecided to drastically reduce the bookings of our playground pitches ,since September 2012. Since then, their relatively surprising lydecision has caused a sharp drop in the usage rate of our playground pitches thereafter.
Reasons for the FA
reduce thereduction of bookings of our playground pitches:
The newly-appointed coach of the ABC football team, which
havehas used our pitches for training for years, repeatedly criticized the surface of our pitches as uneven and frequently water-logged, which easily caused their players injury.
Our playground, in the eyes of the ABC football team, has never been
accessibleuseable, which bringscauses lotsa lot of inconvenience to them for training and increases their costs on travelingfor travel.
Thank you very much!
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