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Please set me clear on the following in red.
For example, someone dealing with large numbers of walk-in clients for a low-cost service in New York City, with huge differences between slow and peak times, contacted European ferry operators to see how they handled a similar problem.
Could I paraphrase the above in red like "someone dealing with large numbers of walk-in clients who want to use a low-cost service in NYC that has huge differences (in price) between slow and peak times," contacted...
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