GilHi,
I have to say vote of thanks on this Saturday after an Indian Festival, which will have food, DJ, and stage performance by the kids. I tried to write it in poetry way below
Please correct the grammar or anything else which look weird here
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I stand here andday dreamdaydream
I wish I could see my India
I wish I could show my children my beautiful festival, "Diwali" ("my festival" means that you own the festival - I would use "the festival")
My day dream cameouttrue (At this point I would discontinue using "daydream" and start using "dream")
God send Deepa and Bindu to take the initiative and to organize mydaydream
I thank Deepa and Binduto maintainfor maintaining this tradition for past seven years
God sent Chitra to book this hall
A hall where mydaydream came true
God sent Lisa tolethelp us rent this beautiful hall
A hall where mydaydream cameouttrue
I thank "Chitra" and "Lisa" for facilitating this hall.
How could mydaydream befull fillfulfilled without the Indian food?
God sent Indian delight to make mydaydream true (Is "Indian delight the name of a company? If so, then capitalize "Delight")
I thank Indian delightto deliverfor delivering the delicious India food
How can I survive by myself? I am not at all powerful, I need the help of others to survive
God send a ton of volunteers to decorate this hall to look like a festive place
The volunteerswhoalso helped in many other unnamed tasks
I thanktoall the volunteers to make mydaydream happen
My heartfelt thank to all the moms whomakeprepared their childrenpreparefor dance, music, poems and prayers
Moms who do not have the replacement like GOD (I don't understand this line)
Mydaydream cameouttrue
God send "Vidhy"with,full of energy to shop for Diwali
I thank "Vidhya" for all her shopping help
Myinnerslefinnerself was dancing with joy to see mydaydream come true
"Suresh" helped us to organizeDJthe music and all others also joined to dance with joy
My great thanks to "Suresh"to bringfor being a beautiful DJ
Last but not least,Ithanks to all the grandparentstopresent here to bless us.
Thank you all.
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Thanks
Gauri

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