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    When the Creature falls the ground opens wide to form the gorge

    Does it sound normal "When the Creature falls the ground opens wide to form the gorge"? It is still from my fantastic text, so don't pay attention to how strange the context is.

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    Re: When the Creature falls the ground opens wide to form the gorge

    Quote Originally Posted by Marina Gaidar View Post
    Does it sound normal "When the Creature falls, the ground opens wide to form the gorge"? It is still from my fantastic text, so don't pay attention to how strange the context is.
    It's OK with the comma.

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