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    Qutoe new year!

    Is it correct?

    "Some people left some people came into my life

    Bad things happened good things backed up
    Life is like a roller coaster, I just have to deal with it
    Another year is arriving, so I wish u a happy new year"

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    Re: Qutoe new year!

    Quote Originally Posted by ladyTL View Post
    Is it correct?

    "Some people left. Some people came into my life.

    Bad things happened. Good things backed up.
    Life is like a roller coaster, I just have to deal with it.
    Another year is arriving, so I wish you a happy new year."
    Did you write this? Is it meant to be read like a poem or just a New Year message?

    I've added some punctuation and repaired the word "you" from simply "u".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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