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    Past simple and past continuous

    Sam, drove in the city last night, and he didn't notice that a cat in the middle of street. Lucky, he was stopping the car in the time and didn't hit it.

    Please check my paragraph past simple and past continuous in particular.

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    Re: Past simple and past continuous

    Quote Originally Posted by diplomacy View Post
    Sam, drove in the city last night, and he didn't notice that a cat in the middle of street. Lucky, he was stopping the car in the time and didn't hit it.

    Please check my paragraph past simple and past continuous in particular.
    When Sam was driving in the city last last night, he didn't notice a cat that was in the middle of the street. Luckily, he was able to stop the car in time and didn't hit it.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 06-Jan-2013 at 23:35. Reason: Typo
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Past simple and past continuous

    Quote Originally Posted by diplomacy View Post
    Sam, drove in the city last night, and he didn't notice that a cat in the middle of street. Lucky, he was stopping the car in the time and didn't hit it.

    Please check my paragraph past simple and past continuous in particular.
    If you really want to start it with "Sam", then:

    Sam, while driving in the city last night, didn't notice that there was a cat in the middle of the street. Luckily, he was able to stop the car in time and didn't hit it.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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