saloom2
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Hi I'm from Egypt and I got B twice in IG and I really want to get higher mark this year. I have recently written an article about Mixed schools Could you read it and give me your opinion and give me small tips to improve it.
Thanks in advance.
A Mixed school has become prevalent throughout the world in the last few decades; however, a lot of schools are still single-sex. It has advantages and disadvantages and choosing one of them depends on the person's learning necessities.
Mixed schools prepare our children for the professional world where both genders aren't separated. Consequently, by the time they finish the 12-year of schooling, they will have been well accustomed to dealing with the opposite gender; moreover, both genders behaves so differently that their attitude will certainly affect their behaviour and respect one another.
On the other hand, it's claimed that in mixed one - females haven't motivation got the same as males in some fields such as Engineering and Medical so they will be forced to deviate to another subjects like humanities, even if they are interested in learning the other subjects. In addition, Both together are easily distracted owing to the fact that it is a natural instinct which usually effects their performance.
From my perspective, I suggest that parents should see whether the mixed or the single one is better deliberately since the situation is worth thinking for their children's future.
Thanks in advance.
A Mixed school has become prevalent throughout the world in the last few decades; however, a lot of schools are still single-sex. It has advantages and disadvantages and choosing one of them depends on the person's learning necessities.
Mixed schools prepare our children for the professional world where both genders aren't separated. Consequently, by the time they finish the 12-year of schooling, they will have been well accustomed to dealing with the opposite gender; moreover, both genders behaves so differently that their attitude will certainly affect their behaviour and respect one another.
On the other hand, it's claimed that in mixed one - females haven't motivation got the same as males in some fields such as Engineering and Medical so they will be forced to deviate to another subjects like humanities, even if they are interested in learning the other subjects. In addition, Both together are easily distracted owing to the fact that it is a natural instinct which usually effects their performance.
From my perspective, I suggest that parents should see whether the mixed or the single one is better deliberately since the situation is worth thinking for their children's future.
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