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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    please correct my mistakes.

    12/01/13
    2 Berkeley street
    HU3 1PR

    Dear Sir/Madam

    I am writing to aplay for the job of a hotel receptionist in your international hotel which was advertised in student newspaper.

    I ave worked in our locel comunity centre as a sport worker for the last three years. during my previous job i have not only improved my Englishi languge but also i have learnt basic use of computer and I.T.

    Three months ago i had travel back to my country.Unexpectedly my journey became longer and consequancly i lost my job.

    I have good social skills, I am frindly, patient, hardworking, energetic. moreover I speak three languages.

    In the light of my previous experience if i got opportunity to this job I believe i would make the name of the hotel more bright and popular nationally and internationally.for interview at any time.

    I lookforward to hearing from you.

    Yours Faithfully,

    I am available
    Sirajud Din

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    #2

    Re: please correct my mistakes.

    Before we spend time on this, you could spend a little more time yourself. All the words I have underlined can be corrected by using any dictionary. You could also capitalise the first person pronoun I.



    Make these corrections, and then re-post your letter for our comments.
    Quote Originally Posted by sirajud View Post
    12/01/13
    2 Berkeley street
    HU3 1PR

    Dear Sir/Madam

    I am writing to aplay for the job of a hotel receptionist in your international hotel which was advertised in student newspaper.

    I ave worked in our locel comunity centre as a sport worker for the last three years. during my previous job i have not only improved my Englishi languge but also i have learnt basic use of computer and I.T.

    Three months ago i had travel back to my country.Unexpectedly my journey became longer and consequancly i lost my job.

    I have good social skills, I am frindly, patient, hardworking, energetic. moreover I speak three languages.

    In the light of my previous experience if i got opportunity to this job I believe i would make the name of the hotel more bright and popular nationally and internationally.for interview at any time.

    I lookforward to hearing from you.

    Yours Faithfully,

    I am available
    Sirajud Din

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