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    uktous is offline Senior Member
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    Where should I put on JobsDB?

    Hi,

    Question:
    Where should I put “on JobsDB”?

    Sentence1:
    In response to your job posting for an Officer (JFF: 000222) on JobsDB, I have attached my CV for your consideration.

    Sentence2:
    In response to your job posting on JobsDB for an Officer (JFF: 000222), I have attached my CV for your consideration.

    Sentence3:
    Other better option

    Thanks
    Last edited by uktous; 13-Jan-2013 at 10:49.

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    emsr2d2 is online now Moderator
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    Re: Where should I put on JobsDB?

    I would use sentence 2. Sentence 1 looks as if the ad was for "an Officer on JobsDB", as if that were the job title. That's not the case.

    I would not use "job posting".

    In response to your advert on JobsDB for an Officer (ref: JFF 000222), I attach my CV and covering letter for your consideration.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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