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    hamidd2 is offline Newbie
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    would you please check my writing letter and say my mistakes and say how is better it

    Dear mr.sayad,
    I am influenced by your new satelite reciever
    I Would like to know more about the prices and types and discounts the seller offer
    Considering hd-tv , what do you suggest?
    Could you send a catalogue and offer competitive price
    I would like to make a decision on this soon,due to fact that I'd appreciate an early reply.
    Yours faithfully
    Saeed

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    emsr2d2 is online now Moderator
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    Re: would you please check my writing letter and say my mistakes and say how is bette

    Duplicate post. This already appears in the main Editing and Writing Topics section. Thread closed.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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