[QUOTE=Odessa Dawn;954095]
#1 and #2 are possible, though unlikely ever be uttered by native speakers, in my opinion. #3 and #4 are unnatural. 5 is just about possible, though very unlikely to be uttered. #6 is not possible,

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"6 But at a birthday party for Herod, Herodias's daughter performed a dance that greatly pleased him,
7 so he promised with a vow to give her anything she wanted."
Please check the following sentences in which I am looking forward to constructing statements that are syntactically and semantically acceptable to native English speakers. I have checked the above sources in order to learn how native speakers build a correct sentence of the word dance and I just to follow suit.
1.I can perform a dance that greatly pleases others.
2.Performing a dance in such a way can bring you to wealth and prestige.
3.Your dancing is beyond measure.
4.Her shape means she can dance greatly.
5.She is looking forward to performing a dance in which her situation will improve (earning a lot of money). In other words, putting an end to her misery.
6.She is her family's bread winner and from the lower class. Thus, dancing greatly will set her free from being in debt to debt-free.
[QUOTE=Odessa Dawn;954095]
#1 and #2 are possible, though unlikely ever be uttered by native speakers, in my opinion. #3 and #4 are unnatural. 5 is just about possible, though very unlikely to be uttered. #6 is not possible,
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