It takes Effort to Win

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huckfieldsue

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Have I ever won a trophy? Yes, I won the highest award of the school, Pastors Award. I was the youngest student ever to receive it.
I had a lot of encouragement throughout the year. My teacher was so helpful. Every time I needed help, he would explain it. My family was also very encouraging. They told me never to give up, and that God will help me.
I value the reward because it is an honour to win the Pastor's Award, since sometimes it's not even given out! Its given to a student who shows Godly character and excellent academic achievement throughout the year.
I love this award because it is a reminder of how God helped me.
 
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Yes, [STRIKE]would[/STRIKE] does the above short essay have any grammar errors?

See above for corrections. Your incorrect spelling of "grammar" is a very common error but it's important to get it right. When is your short essay due to be submitted to your teacher/tutor?
 
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