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  1. Newbie
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    please correct me.

    His name was Aleem and he was an only child. Unfortunately war split out between two tribes and consequently many innocent people have lost their lives. Horizon of his town has covered by smoke of burning houses and human bodies .Aleemís town which was a paradise on the earth in his eyes, became a village of terror and bloodshed.
    Aleemís parents were very worry regarding his safety. But didnít know what to do. There is no way to go and no place to refuge. Because after long wait and hard struggle they founded a job and had settled down in that place. So they want to stay here and also they want to see the tree of their hopes to be thrive.
    They like this area because they want to live, die and burred over here with the side of their parents grave.
    But on the other hand they were very worry and want to leave this place before any calamity dropped over their life.

  2. emsr2d2's Avatar
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    Re: please correct me.

    Duplicate post. You have already posted this in the Editing and Writing Topics section. Thread closed.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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