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Hi,
The context is as follow:
The environmental impact flows of the syntheses of LiFe[SUB]0.98[/SUB]Mn[SUB]0.02[/SUB]PO[SUB]4[/SUB]/C and LiFe[SUB]0.98[/SUB]Ti[SUB]0.02[/SUB]PO[SUB]4[/SUB]/C are diagrammed in Fig. 3 and Fig. 4, with the corresponding EI[SUB]m[/SUB] of each material is labelled in the material box.
Is the use of the comma correct or how to restructure this sentence for clarity?
Thanks for your time.
The context is as follow:
The environmental impact flows of the syntheses of LiFe[SUB]0.98[/SUB]Mn[SUB]0.02[/SUB]PO[SUB]4[/SUB]/C and LiFe[SUB]0.98[/SUB]Ti[SUB]0.02[/SUB]PO[SUB]4[/SUB]/C are diagrammed in Fig. 3 and Fig. 4, with the corresponding EI[SUB]m[/SUB] of each material is labelled in the material box.
Is the use of the comma correct or how to restructure this sentence for clarity?
Thanks for your time.