backonstage
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- Jan 21, 2013
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Hello,
I have come up with a blessing that shall be written on a special gift for a friend. However, I am uncertain about a construction in my very first sentence. It goes like this:
"May all time the sunlight kiss you awake
From dreams full of newborn melodies
For you to bring them to life."
The words in question are marked bold.
What I want to say is: "...so that you can bring them to life" or "...because it is your mission to bring them to life".
Does the above sentence mean anything like that? And is it grammatically correct?
I have come up with a blessing that shall be written on a special gift for a friend. However, I am uncertain about a construction in my very first sentence. It goes like this:
"May all time the sunlight kiss you awake
From dreams full of newborn melodies
For you to bring them to life."
The words in question are marked bold.
What I want to say is: "...so that you can bring them to life" or "...because it is your mission to bring them to life".
Does the above sentence mean anything like that? And is it grammatically correct?
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