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    kabamawekesa is offline Newbie
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    Need help on making essay have more thought instead of examples.

    Hi,
    I recently had a conversation with my teacher and she read my essay. She said it was good, but I would have to put more thought instead of examples from the book. What does she mean by this and can anyone give me any examples of thought in essays.

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    Re: Need help on making essay have more thought instead of examples.

    It means you need to come up with original ideas yourself, instead of simply copying facts from a book and rearranging the order.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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