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#1 24-Jan-2013, 21:55Need help on making essay have more thought instead of examples.
Hi,
I recently had a conversation with my teacher and she read my essay. She said it was good, but I would have to put more thought instead of examples from the book. What does she mean by this and can anyone give me any examples of thought in essays.
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#2 29-Jan-2013, 14:41Re: Need help on making essay have more thought instead of examples.
It means you need to come up with original ideas yourself, instead of simply copying facts from a book and rearranging the order.
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.
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