Need help on making essay have more thought instead of examples.

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kabamawekesa

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Hi,
I recently had a conversation with my teacher and she read my essay. She said it was good, but I would have to put more thought instead of examples from the book. What does she mean by this and can anyone give me any examples of thought in essays.
 

emsr2d2

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It means you need to come up with original ideas yourself, instead of simply copying facts from a book and rearranging the order.
 
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