Student or Learner
I'm applying for a master degree in a business school, and I'm wondering if I have to make as a statement.
"Enrolling the XX master in your School XX)
I'm not entirely sure what you're trying to say but "Enrolling the physics master in your school" means that you would like to sign your teacher of physics up to attend the school.
Perhaps you meant to start it "Enrolling in/on XXX Masters ..."
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